Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（10分）

在初三班會課上，老師要求同學(xué)們就“暑期外出安全”話題展開小組討論。以下表格內(nèi)容是你所在小組討論后提出的建議，請根據(jù)該內(nèi)容，以“How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

交通	不在馬路上踢球，過馬路要當(dāng)心
食品	不吃不干凈食品，盡量少喝冷飲
游泳	不要獨(dú)自去游泳，到游泳池游泳
求助	有危險求助大眾，或者及時報警

要求：1、短文要包含表格內(nèi)所有的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、短文中不能提及你的真實姓名和所在學(xué)校。

3、詞數(shù)70左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation

We all know that it’s important for us teenagers to keep safe in the summer vacation. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of our suggestions.

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I hope the above suggestions can help you have a safe and happy summer vacation

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Safe in the Summer Vacation

We all know that it’s important for us teenagers to keep safe in the summer vacation. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of our suggestions.

First of all, You should obey the traffic rules. When you cross the road, you should first look at the left then the right. You mustn’t play football on the road. If we are careful enough, we can reduce the traffic accidents.

Second, you should be careful about the food that you eat.or drink. In summer , it is easer for food to go bad..So we must eat the fresh and clean food. And we should drink as little cold drink. as possible.

Third , don't go swimming alone. If there is something dangerous happening , he or she can do something to help you. If you want to go swimming , you must choose the swimming pool..

There is no doubt that keeping safe is important. But if we are in danger or we see dangerous things , we must ask people around for help or we can call the polic in time.

I hope the above suggestions can help you have a safe and happy summer vacation

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。所給的材料主要分四個方面：交通安全，食品安全，游泳安全及發(fā)生危險后怎么做。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。因為是安全建議所以有可能會用到y(tǒng)ou should do /shouldn’t do …, you can…, you must/mustn’t do , don’t do 等表示建議的句式。在寫作中注意連詞的應(yīng)用及上下文的銜接。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文分四個方面對假期安全做了建議。短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。用

到了you should do /shouldn’t do …， don’tdo, you must/mustn’t do等表示建議的句式。同時還用到了if 條

件狀語從句，There is no doubt that等復(fù)合句。這寫使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。