Question

國(guó)有國(guó)法，校有校規(guī)。在你的學(xué)校中一定有很多規(guī)章制度來(lái)規(guī)范中學(xué)生的行為，使學(xué)生們都能健康成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇小短文向大家介紹某條校規(guī)、校紀(jì)，如能用自己的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)評(píng)價(jià)就更好了。（70詞左右）

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Answer 1

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One possible version:

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms , we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是材料作文，考生在寫(xiě)作之前必須認(rèn)真讀題，把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的。本文要求寫(xiě)一篇小短文向大家介紹某條校規(guī)、校紀(jì)，用自己的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)評(píng)價(jià)更好。字?jǐn)?shù)要求70詞左右。校規(guī)、校紀(jì)應(yīng)該用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞表示應(yīng)該做的，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作前最好先列出提綱，寫(xiě)出有關(guān)的短語(yǔ)和固定表達(dá)備用。最后適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞連起來(lái)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)運(yùn)用正確。還恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了些短語(yǔ)和復(fù)雜的句式，如have to ,should; if條件狀語(yǔ)從句，還有表語(yǔ)從句，可能對(duì)初中生來(lái)說(shuō)太難，但是可以作為固定句式記住等等。并注意了句子開(kāi)頭的變化和的銜接如 and so等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。