Question

12．在我們的生活中，總會遇到許多困難或不如意的事情，如生活上的、學習上的、情感上的…我們要有信心去克服它，不要輕言放棄！請你以"Never Give Up"為題寫一篇短文，讓我們分享你的經(jīng)歷、感受或想法．字數(shù)：80詞左右．
溫馨提示：（1）短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學校名稱．
（2）這些單詞也許對你有幫助：difficulty，unhappy，deal with，confident
Never Give Up
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study all the time before I began to study physics．I thought physics was so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I was not afraid of physics any more and made great progress after that．
Never give up，believe yourself that you can overcome the probles．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談談生活中遇到的困難或不如意的事情．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)過去．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．事情經(jīng)歷
2．感受想法．
常用到的重點短語：
do well in 擅長…
so…that 如此…以至于
give up 放棄
talk about 談論
chat with sb與某人聊天
be afraid of  害怕…
make progress 取得進步

高分句型：
I thought ①physics was ②so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．
①省略了引導詞that 的賓語從句．
②so…that…如此…以至于，中間加上形容詞或副詞，so 是副詞，在這里修飾形容詞difficult and boring．that引導結(jié)果狀語從句．
①Never give up，believe yourself ②that you can overcome the probles．
①祈使句的運用．
②that引導的賓語從句，作為believe的賓語．

解答 Never Give Up
Difficulties may come with the happiness in our life．I did well in my study all the time before I began to study physics．I thought physics was so difficult and boring that I had so many problems to learn it well．（高分句型）I nearly wanted to give it up．
I talked about my problems to my teachers．He gave me some advice to improve my study．I also got some help from my classmates after class．I rebuilt my confidence by chatting with my parents，reading，enjoying the music and doing sports．I was not afraid of physics any more and made great progress after that．（事情的經(jīng)過）
Never give up，believe yourself that you can overcome the probles．（高分句型）（感想）

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