Question

【題目】書面表達：

某英語報開展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress（考試壓力）”征文比賽，請你根據圖片和表格中提示的內容，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。

注意：（1）詞數80-100左右，短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數

（2）文中不得提及考生所在學校及自己的姓名

適當的壓力	積極思考，認真學習 按時復習，防止遺忘
過重的壓力	無法入睡，非常疲倦 害怕考試，導致失敗
應對的措施	合理計劃，準備充分 …… (至少2條)

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to go over (review) our lessons on time to remember them. So we can pass the exam easily.

However, if we have too heavy/much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired or sleepy in class. We may fear/be afraid of exams too much and fail in the end.

In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare everything well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in exams. (108words)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何解決考試帶來的壓力。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：A little bit of stress can be......；it can remind us to .....；if we have......及we’d better ......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文后要用題目要求的提綱內容。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭是考試帶來的壓力的好處，接下來介紹考試壓力的不利之處，最后指出我們解決考試壓力。此處用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。