Question

4．一家英文網(wǎng)站開辟了一個青少年專欄，主題是"十年后的我"．請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文．
1．家庭2．工作3．業(yè)余生活
注意：
1．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
2．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．i will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是說說對十年后的自己的暢想．時態(tài)主要為一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．家庭
2．工作
3．業(yè)余生活
常用到的重點短語：
get along  with sb與某人相處
in one's free time在某人的空閑的時候
such as 例如
continue to do sth繼續(xù)做某事
in a word 總之
【高分句型】
1．I'will ①do a good job in②whatever I do．
①do a good job in在某方面做的好．
②whatever I do．作為介詞in的賓語從句．
2．①In a word，my life will be ②much richer and more colorful．
①in a word 總之．
②much修飾比較級，表程度．

解答 I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（業(yè)余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．