Question

2．It was my birthday last year．Every year，my parents prepared abirthday giftfor me．So that day I was expecting a birthday gift，too．After I came back from school，I sawmy motherwatching TV in the sitting room．
"Mom，where is my birthday gift？"I asked．Hearin g that，my mother looked up at me．She looked surprised．Then she said，"Sorry，I totally forgot it's your birthda y today．I haven't got a birthday gift for you．"I was very sadto hear that．I went to my room and shut the door．
About half an hour later，my mother came and knocked on the door．She told me supper was ready．
"Come out to eat quickly，"she said as if nothing had happened．After I went out，I saw my mother and father sitting at the table．I came to the table，unhappy．
"So how is everything going in school？"while eating，my father asked．
"Nothing special，"I said in a low voice．
   After supper，my father said，"Let's go out and enjoy a ride．"
   I wasn't in a good mood，so I said，"I don't feel like going anywhere．"
   My father smiled and said，"Follow me．You won't get disappointed．"
   Looking at the smile on my father's face，I suddenly cheered up．I was sure my parents had prepared a surprise for me．So I followed．
   Then we went out of the house and got onmy father's car．I thought they were taking me to the downtown area to get a birthday gift or watch a show at a theater．
However，after a while，I realized we were not heading to the downtown area．Instead，we were going in the opposite direction．I became very curious．About half an hour later，my father stopped the car on a farm．The owner of the farm came out to greet us．The air was sweet and warm．There were many goats there．The farmer's daughter gave me a baby goatto hold．I suddenly knew it was my birthday gift．
注意：
1．所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；
2．應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；
3．續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；
4．續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語．
Paragraph 1：
The other day，while I was reading a book，I looked at a picture of a baby goat．      ．
Paragraph 2：
I held the baby goat in my arms and touched it．      ．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Then I realized that she actually decided to get me one for my birthday when she heard that．
該句使用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，放在realize后面；when引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句；
（高分句型二）I couldn't think of a better birthday gift，which was really a big surprise．
couldn't和better否定詞和比較級連用，表示最高級；which引導(dǎo)一個非限制性定語從句；
注意在續(xù)寫時，首先確定時態(tài)為一般過去時，并要體現(xiàn)文章中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞，最后要突出續(xù)寫的主題．

解答 The other day，while I was reading a book，I looked at a picture of a baby goat．The baby goatlooked so lovely that I wanted to own one．After reading the book，I told my motherthat I wanted to raise a baby goat．However，my mother didn't say anything when she heard that．（高分句型一）Then I realized that she actually decided to get me one for my birthday when she heard that．
     I held the baby goat in my arms and touched it．My mother asked me whether I liked it，and I immediately nodded．（高分句型二）I couldn't think of a better birthday gift，which was really a big surprise．Later，we drove back with the baby goat．Since then I have kept it in the garden of our house．Each time I see it，I know how much my parentslove me!

點評 寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內(nèi)容有關(guān)的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關(guān)的要點，列出寫作提綱．