Question

【題目】七.書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分)

根據(jù)表格提供的信息，以My favourite season為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹春季。

Answer 1

【答案】My favourite season

My favourite season is spring. Spring means life and growth. The trees begin to grow and green leaves come out. There are different kinds of flowers everywhere. Bees and butterflies are playing among them. Birds are singing beautifully in the trees.

It is warm and nice in spring. People like to go outside for fun. It is a perfect time to fly kites o n windy days. Parks are full of people at weekends. During this season, people will plant lots of trees. The trees can make our world more beautiful.

Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature , but also gives us lots of fun and hope. A year's plan starts with spring. Let's take action in spring!

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My favourite season”為題，結(jié)合所給的表格內(nèi)容材料，介紹你最喜歡的季節(jié)—春季。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文章以“My favourite season is spring.”開(kāi)頭，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直入主題；文中come out，different kinds of，go outside for fun，everywhere, be full of，starts with, among等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用， 使上下文意連接緊密，表達(dá)恰切；同時(shí)使用了固定句型It is a perfect time to fly kites on windy days，并列句not only…but also…, 以及祈使句Let's take action in spring，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。